Faded dream
A Poem by
Candle in the wind
The picture inspired this...
It was a gentle grasp
A firm clasp
A warm holding
Faith unfolding
Made her feel steady
And yet so heady
Was another world
Her spirit unfurled
Was like an embrace
With divine grace
The vision faded
Reality invaded
© 2008 Candle in the wind
Reviews
A very beautifully written poem. Wonderfully penned. Great job.
Posted 16 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Beautifully written.........to get lost for a minute like that.
A warm holding
Faith unfolding
Made her feel steady
It's a shame reality returns!!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Beautifully written.........to get lost for a minute like that.
A warm holding
Faith unfolding
Made her feel steady
It's a shame reality returns!!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Just read this again .. delightful ....
Posted 16 Years Ago
Just read this again .. delightful ....
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful piece, very uplifting. I found the sad ending a little dissapointing, yet it seemed right...not sure why...
I pilfered your picture! Sorry LOL xxx
Helen xxx
Posted 16 Years Ago
Beautiful piece, very uplifting. I found the sad ending a little dissapointing, yet it seemed right...not sure why...
I pilfered your picture! Sorry LOL xxx
Helen xxx
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I am here at last my dear sister. I have read every bit of yourself that you have poured out here. Bravo!
Posted 16 Years Ago
I am here at last my dear sister. I have read every bit of yourself that you have poured out here. Bravo!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
I love the flow of your poem!!!
Posted 16 Years Ago
I love the flow of your poem!!!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
You have done a superb job and making a picture and telling us what it speaks to you!
Great job!
Posted 16 Years Ago
You have done a superb job and making a picture and telling us what it speaks to you!
Great job!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
The rythm is like a song... I love to know where people get there inspiration. Very cool...
Posted 16 Years Ago
The rythm is like a song... I love to know where people get there inspiration. Very cool...
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
A beautiful poem! "was like an embrace, with divine grace" love that part. Then, reality. Sometimes you feel that close, but, for me, it's too short lived! A great read, beautiful imagery. Barbara
Posted 16 Years Ago
A beautiful poem! "was like an embrace, with divine grace" love that part. Then, reality. Sometimes you feel that close, but, for me, it's too short lived! A great read, beautiful imagery. Barbara
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
It is lovely. Reality invades far too often, I fear. You have such a graceful pen.
Posted 16 Years Ago
It is lovely. Reality invades far too often, I fear. You have such a graceful pen.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Candle in the wind Calcutta, India
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