Faded dream
A Poem by
Candle in the wind
The picture inspired this...
It was a gentle grasp
A firm clasp
A warm holding
Faith unfolding
Made her feel steady
And yet so heady
Was another world
Her spirit unfurled
Was like an embrace
With divine grace
The vision faded
Reality invaded
© 2008 Candle in the wind
Reviews
WOW!!!!!
Exquisite....especially how the image goes along with the words....
How do you write so simply, yet with so much power and depth!!!
Thanks for sharing this...
God Bless!
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I like this. It's simple and to the point. I really enjoyed this poem! Good job!
Posted 16 Years Ago
I like this. It's simple and to the point. I really enjoyed this poem! Good job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
this one has magic written within it, if I may ask, whats the hidden message cause there is one, and I might be too tired to find it, so if you may tell me I would be really thankful
Very beautiful, amazing way of using words, all the respect from me to a real writer
All the best,
Tamer Qtaish
Posted 16 Years Ago
this one has magic written within it, if I may ask, whats the hidden message cause there is one, and I might be too tired to find it, so if you may tell me I would be really thankful
Very beautiful, amazing way of using words, all the respect from me to a real writer
All the best,
Tamer Qtaish
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Oh wow, I love rhis, the imagery is beautiful and very telling of the story (or in this case poem) You sure do have a way with words sweet Raj, I was taken on the journey through this, I felt almost taken to the side of the devine, but like it is the way in life "The vision faded, Reality invaded" very well worded.
Love it
Love from
Me
Posted 16 Years Ago
Oh wow, I love rhis, the imagery is beautiful and very telling of the story (or in this case poem) You sure do have a way with words sweet Raj, I was taken on the journey through this, I felt almost taken to the side of the devine, but like it is the way in life "The vision faded, Reality invaded" very well worded.
Love it
Love from
Me
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
What a dreamy like poem. It was mystical. The images the words created were just as in the picture...heavenly, magical. Rain..
Posted 16 Years Ago
What a dreamy like poem. It was mystical. The images the words created were just as in the picture...heavenly, magical. Rain..
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is an inspiring piece. Again, very beautifully put together. "Reality invaded" as it so often does. Amazingly potent ending as well!
Posted 16 Years Ago
This is an inspiring piece. Again, very beautifully put together. "Reality invaded" as it so often does. Amazingly potent ending as well!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Lovely things can inspire us to bring forth beautiful words and images. I find the two line sentences enchanting as each gives a him and her feeling to me. A venture into the great unknown filled with promise and hope.
The last two lines offer diferent thoughts. Is this a dream state , of what is -- or a memory of what was?
Reality bites either way.
Well Done
Jen-JG
Posted 16 Years Ago
Lovely things can inspire us to bring forth beautiful words and images. I find the two line sentences enchanting as each gives a him and her feeling to me. A venture into the great unknown filled with promise and hope.
The last two lines offer diferent thoughts. Is this a dream state , of what is -- or a memory of what was?
Reality bites either way.
Well Done
Jen-JG
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful.
Simply beyond words.
Blessings..
-rupam
Posted 16 Years Ago
Beautiful.
Simply beyond words.
Blessings..
-rupam
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautifully done. Very nice.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Beautifully done. Very nice.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A wonderful glimpse at a comforting dream, as well as a beautiful picture. This had a nice flow to it....a pleasure to read :-)
Posted 16 Years Ago
A wonderful glimpse at a comforting dream, as well as a beautiful picture. This had a nice flow to it....a pleasure to read :-)
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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