Let Me Try

Let Me Try

A Poem by Candle in the wind
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Three attempts at 6 word technique..three spurts

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Let go...

 

Do let go

Cleanse the woe

 

Embrace Reality...

 

Diminish expectation

Accept digression

Embrace transition

 

Ease...

 

Be at peace

Torment will ease

© 2008 Candle in the wind


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First off, your photo with this is lovely and matches quite nicely to the mood painted with your words. I like the black bolding and larger titles--this draws the photo in with your writing. Great visuals!
Your sections are beautiful alone and also flow so nicely together.
Very serene and full of beauty and knowledge!

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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Knowledge is gained
peace is spread

Love given freely
can't be taken

Words have power
lies destroy lives

Just some thoughts that leaped into my head after reading this inspirational piece. You are a true writer my dear.

Great Job!!!!!




Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

p.s. I adore the title as well! Perfectly penned!

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

First off, your photo with this is lovely and matches quite nicely to the mood painted with your words. I like the black bolding and larger titles--this draws the photo in with your writing. Great visuals!
Your sections are beautiful alone and also flow so nicely together.
Very serene and full of beauty and knowledge!

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.

An embodiement of what the word "OM" actually means... ANANDA! ~B

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

So simple, so fulfilling to the reader...
Very beautiful, from top to bottom, each one of them.
Good job...

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very well written.

Subtle.
I like the profound messages they deliver with the least words spoken.


Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Lovely short scribes, all three carryring great little, deep messages.

I like them a lot.

Love,
Me

P.s
thanks for the friendship invite

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant .... so cleverly written .. each of them is quite excellent .... you are getting addicted !!! Smiling....

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Candle in the wind
Candle in the wind

Calcutta, India



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