Let Me Try
A Poem by
Candle in the wind
Three attempts at 6 word technique..three spurts
Let go...
Do let go
Cleanse the woe
Embrace Reality...
Diminish expectation
Accept digression
Embrace transition
Ease...
Be at peace
Torment will ease
© 2008 Candle in the wind
Featured Review
First off, your photo with this is lovely and matches quite nicely to the mood painted with your words. I like the black bolding and larger titles--this draws the photo in with your writing. Great visuals!
Your sections are beautiful alone and also flow so nicely together.
Very serene and full of beauty and knowledge!
Posted 16 Years Ago
4 of 4 people found this review constructive.
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Knowledge is gained
peace is spread
Love given freely
can't be taken
Words have power
lies destroy lives
Just some thoughts that leaped into my head after reading this inspirational piece. You are a true writer my dear.
Great Job!!!!!
Posted 16 Years Ago
Knowledge is gained
peace is spread
Love given freely
can't be taken
Words have power
lies destroy lives
Just some thoughts that leaped into my head after reading this inspirational piece. You are a true writer my dear.
Great Job!!!!!
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
p.s. I adore the title as well! Perfectly penned!
Posted 16 Years Ago
p.s. I adore the title as well! Perfectly penned!
4 of 4 people found this review constructive.
First off, your photo with this is lovely and matches quite nicely to the mood painted with your words. I like the black bolding and larger titles--this draws the photo in with your writing. Great visuals!
Your sections are beautiful alone and also flow so nicely together.
Very serene and full of beauty and knowledge!
Posted 16 Years Ago
First off, your photo with this is lovely and matches quite nicely to the mood painted with your words. I like the black bolding and larger titles--this draws the photo in with your writing. Great visuals!
Your sections are beautiful alone and also flow so nicely together.
Very serene and full of beauty and knowledge!
4 of 4 people found this review constructive.
An embodiement of what the word "OM" actually means... ANANDA! ~B
Posted 16 Years Ago
An embodiement of what the word "OM" actually means... ANANDA! ~B
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
So simple, so fulfilling to the reader...
Very beautiful, from top to bottom, each one of them.
Good job...
Posted 16 Years Ago
So simple, so fulfilling to the reader...
Very beautiful, from top to bottom, each one of them.
Good job...
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
Very well written.
Subtle.
I like the profound messages they deliver with the least words spoken.
Posted 16 Years Ago
Very well written.
Subtle.
I like the profound messages they deliver with the least words spoken.
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
Lovely short scribes, all three carryring great little, deep messages.
I like them a lot.
Love,
Me
P.s
thanks for the friendship invite
Posted 16 Years Ago
Lovely short scribes, all three carryring great little, deep messages.
I like them a lot.
Love,
Me
P.s
thanks for the friendship invite
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
Brilliant .... so cleverly written .. each of them is quite excellent .... you are getting addicted !!! Smiling....
Posted 16 Years Ago
Brilliant .... so cleverly written .. each of them is quite excellent .... you are getting addicted !!! Smiling....
3 of 3 people found this review constructive.
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Candle in the wind Calcutta, India
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