Let Me Try

Three attempts at 6 word technique..three spurts

Let go...

 

Do let go

Cleanse the woe

 

Embrace Reality...

 

Diminish expectation

Accept digression

Embrace transition

 

Ease...

 

Be at peace

Torment will ease

Reviews

[None]

First off, your photo with this is lovely and matches quite nicely to the mood painted with your words. I like the black bolding and larger titles--this draws the photo in with your writing. Great visuals!
Your sections are beautiful alone and also flow so nicely together.
Very serene and full of beauty and knowledge!

One of the most difficult things to write are short poems because it feels like a lot is yet to be explained.

This poem has been able to paint a wonderful picture with a mere few strokes.

It conveys the message well, even if we can only wish for more.

This is a wonderful piece

[Michael X]

the photo is brilliant, heart ascending beautiful, the 6 word forms are intriguing, and shows the depthful
quality of thought put into every word, the way this is written, reminds me of a self reflection, being able to stand on the outside and look in, and if truly focused upon leaves me slightly in a disagreement,
i find myself more disembracing, but seeing the way you brought the underlying meaning to light,
makes perfect sense to Diminish expectation, Accept digression, Embrace transition, in order to be
at peace, in any regards the scope of vision is enlightened, in way of presenting new perspectives.

[Rain]

I agree with Nuala. Unbelievable picture. I felt more comfortable with "Ease"..not sure why. This genre is new to me, but I'd love to try it once. Rain..

[Drea]

OK THIS is going into my library. I can already see using each section as a mantra with meditations. Don't know if that was the intent; but it is perfect. I know just which colours and chakra points I wish to pair these words with. Bless you for writing such a gift for me to find!

[Brenda Sue]

A beautifully written poem and I love the format. The picture adds so much to the poem. Wonderfully penned.

[Bubo]

What lovely thoughts in a world full of turmoil, to be able to let go......be at peace
I enjoyed the layout and positive feel to your writing.

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This is a fantastic meditation piece Raj, I sat looking at the boldened words and was able to let them sink in...good advice for a toubled world.
Helen :-)

[E. M. Murren]

Your words of wisdom ring true. They are simple but eternal. Thank you for sharing with us.

[Prince of Poetry]

This is a great piece of work i love the format

[Emily B]

This is lovely and strong. Striking form.