Hold On

Bring me on

for the life that I morn

It's a thought

that makes me hold on.

A hope

that may come alive

between the ups & downs

Just to stop this tiresome drive.

Bring me on

The happiness & the song

The reasons to quit

& the strength to move on.

A hive

filled with reasons to smile

May be lost, but keeps

the love beguile.

#RA

Author's Note

please ignore grammar problems but please feel free to advise. I am open for critics.

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Lovely words. I liked the tone, keep it up.

[Great Aunt Astri]

I like the near rhyme ...morn/on and song/on I also like @A hive filled with reasons to smile Very POETIC

[ReedWrite]

Beautiful.
There is a gentle feel to this...and a lovely flow.
The message is eternal.
Nice job.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

In between the life miseries, hope is the only thing that make us move forward. Great read☺