Through My Eyes

For those helpless people who need a hand for help, for those people who still has got humanity left in them. Helping them is helping yourself.

If you could see by my eyes,

you would see a million cries.

A million griefs lost in the smile,

a long road that ends in a mile.

Those eyes full of hopes,

need your hands to cope.

So much they have to cry for,

yet they know its not the time to die for.

Fighting is the only way,

to make your smile win this game.

enlightening yourself everyday,

to make yourself win the fame.

If you could see by my eys

you would want to cry for cries.

You may not have a million to smile,

But million feelings to share for a while.

Author's Note

Help Humanity! Even if you dont want to review..

Reviews

[Laminators Dubai]

its different from your other writes...its helplessly thoughtful...or maybe it does not needs to be helped...msg of the poem is far beyond greatness...
helping other is helping yourself...showing the way to others is to find a way for ones it self...
an spendid write...
thanks for sharing the words...

[Rajiv Anand]

Thanks for revieweing it was just an attempt!

[Laminators Dubai]

well its much greater for attempt...

[Rajiv Anand]

Thanks I wanted it this way.. DA..

[Laminators Dubai]

..........da........^^XOXOXO

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's great how you could write such an emotional and valuable piece .. I'm just speechless about this piece... am so much heartfelt for this poem that I'm unable to write a firm review....
I'm proud of you writing this kind of poetry.....

[Rajiv Anand]

Thanks a lot, it is very motivating that you reviewed my poems in such wonderful words. It is encouraging. Thanks again.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Most welcome.... it was surely a pleasure reading your works...