She's Been the Love

My poem dated on JUne 25, 2013

She's been away,

while I'm left on the way.

She's been far,

just like the shining star.

She's been all,

when I've nothing at all.

She's been the light,

in the lonely scary night.

She's been the hope,

while I've no way to cope.

She's been the wish,

like the Gods grace n bliss.

She's been the only,

When I'm all lonely.

She's been my ever,

For who I can wait forever.

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Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

It's heart wrenching and I really can't control myself reading these stuff. I'm an emotional fellow so usually reading these is like adding butter to the pan.. It melts my heart like anything...
Why God does such things so cruel.. like he does to me always...
I've been there in the place you described here and I'm against that cruel god who never listens to my cry or wish and grants cruelty to almost all in the world....
Anyway, this is the first time I read your work and really it took away all my attention as well as appreciation...
Keep writing.. and keep going ...
i hope you get the one you deserve ... your better half may arrive soon into your heart.... :-)
Anindita: )

[Donyay Thomas]

I like it and i can't wait to see more

[Laminators Dubai]

you write easy...so you write from your heart...we can tell...
really nice rhyme...
full of love...
thanks for sharing...