Someway Someday

She jumps in my thought,
She pumps in my blood,
every moment I live,
stronger it goes to tie the knot.

I look through the air.
I see a picture of her.
I close my eyes
I see you to my surprise.

You are always high on me,
Just like the sky on me,
You shine through my days,
Like the sun and its rays.

You gonna stay in me,
till my life will stay in me.
No matter what way,
We gonna make it someday.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problem. Any suggestion or feedback is welcomed.

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

Each part has a fabulous impact on the reader and the way it flows with simplicity tugs onto my heart.. Really very good piece. Seems you are eager to make the better half or may be already met.. But whatever it is, you wrote this very sweetly and in a romantic way with feelings right from your heart........
Nice piece once again...

[Sami Khalil]

"I look through the air.
I see a picture of her.
I close my eyes
I see you to my surprise.

You are always high on me,
Just like the sky on me,"
A splendid read and write...:)

[Rajiv Anand]

Hey thanks for reading.. and reviewing .. i hope you will like my other posts too..

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Laminators Dubai]

told you wc is a good place...

[Great Aunt Astri]

incorrect grammar makes interesting reading! I love the beat to this poem(Any reason why the first verse did not rhyme?) I feel I would like to listen to it while I do the kitchen chores. It would put a spring in my feet.

[Rajiv Anand]

Wanted to write something else.. but then this is how I ended!

[Great Aunt Astri]

sometimes the Muse can be a bit pesky, a bit of a bully!

[Rajiv Anand]

Ha ha true..