Be there for Me

All we want from our loved ones to be there with us especially when we are low. What if the distance between you don't allow you to be together?

It seems like I wanna die,

It feels like I wanna cry

Coz your absence has hurt me a lot,

And your memories are not enough anymore

I find it hard to breathe without you,

If you wanna feel then just walk a mile in my shoe

Every time I close my eyes to take a nap,

I can’t see anything except a huge gap (between us)

Though we love each other without any doubt,

But we need to give sometime to each other that’s what I wanna shout

I wanna talk with you even if you aren’t free,

All I want to say is, Just Be there for me

Maybe you feel like me or maybe not,

But I wanna make our relationship perfect without any dirty spot

It’s hard to sleep it’s hard to wait,

Oh! My Angel, Will you go with me on a date?

Sometimes I feel like the world is so mean,

It doesn’t let two lovers exist then how can it be clean?

For the existence of our Love, you started having fast,

And if we will try we can make it to the last

I wanna talk with you even if you aren’t free,

All I want to say is, Just Be there for me.

 

Author's Note

The distance between her and me is just killing me from inside. Any suggestions will be appreciated :)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful and hopeful words.
"I wanna talk with you even if you aren’t free,
All I want to say is, Just Be there for me."
We need people to be there for us and we must do the same. Thank you Rajat for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rajat malik]

Thank you for rising me once again when I've been drowned in my life. Really Coyote you've always helped me with your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

Always my pleasure to read your work my friend and you are welcome.

[Jeyanthi]

It's beautiful narration.. many come and go..but only one stays in heart..and it hurts too sometimes..

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. I can feel your emotions. This is beautifully written.

[writ rajat]

Very nice Rajat ji commendable

[Rajat malik]

Thanks bro :)

[Farrah]

Can distance soften the hearts or will it make it easier to forget love? I love your poem. It really made me think and wonder about things. It is a huge poem in meaning! I loved it! :-) Thank u for sharing it with us!

[Rajat malik]

You are always welcome Farrah. Sorry for late reply. Actually I post everything on my blog now. You can check it here- www.thediaryofloveblog.wordpress.com

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

A beautiful song of yearning and love.
Sometimes love can really shake our very core and make us question everything we are and we want to be.
I liked the well penned, emotive poem!

PS: In the line 'Sometimes I feel like the word is so mean...', maybe you meant 'world' instead of 'word'..?

[Rajat malik]

Thank you so much for reviewing it. Ya! actually i mean 'The world'. I am changing it. Thanks for reminding me.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.