Hard to forget

What if your Friend steal your Loved ones from you? What would you feel then? Of course you will feel neglected and much more. But what can be Done? Let's take a Tour of Poem.

Because you are the Girl and I am a Boy,

Because you are the Pearl and I am a Toy

For you I have waken up myself whole night,

But you have just slept in your Quilt while holding it tight

Maybe I am right or maybe I am wrong,

For you Baby I have written a sweet song

If this is what was all your plan,

Then why you accepted me as your Man?

Loving you was easy but leaving you is hard,

Do you remember that day when I gave you a Card?

They say that Time is the greatest Healer,

But I have understood that it’s just a greatest killer

Because today also your memories Haunts me,

My Soul have crushed and it still taunt me

I have given up Hope and this is the worst thing,

I remember the Days when you wanted me to be your King

Without you my Life have become Hell,

Still I imagine you while ringing my Doorbell

If I wouldn’t have asked you to meet my Friend,

Then, I know, I wouldn’t have faced our story’s end

Faulty was I as I couldn’t see you both Flirt,

But at that Time I was busy in removing your Clothes dirt

As I stop writing just to hide my Pain,

I can still feel the Shower of your Reign.

 

Author's Note

Please tell me the mistakes, I know there are a lot of Grammatical mistakes. I love Critics.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts led to good ending.
"As I stop writing just to hide my Pain,
I can still feel the Shower of your Reign."
Some people can steal our thoughts and mind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rajat malik]

Thank you very much Coyote.......Yes you are right some people can take away everything from us and we can't even rely upon them for anything

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Manish K Mishra]

can feel the lines.......its commendable..
.....poem doesn't count grammatical mistakes.

[Rajat malik]

Oh! Really. Thanx again. It mean a lot infact you mean a lot.

[Mari K]

This is not bad at all. However, I think you should change "rain" in the last line to "reign", to reference the power she held while giving the line a double meaning. I also don't understand what you mean by clothes dirt, so think that needs clarification. Overall, its pretty good.

[Rajat malik]

Thank you so much Mari.....
I am glad that you pointed out the mistakes......feels like I am alive.....
I think that clothes dirt is right at its place.......which is telling you that I was just like henpecked......
Although I am changing'rain' to 'reign'

[Mari K]

What is clothes dirt? Do you mean lint?

[Rajat malik]

Yes.....it's the dirt of clothes.....like lint i think......here it's called as dirt only.......that's why i added it.......

[Mari K]

I see. Makes sense then

[Rajat malik]

Oh....okay.......lol

[Not here]

i dont focus on the msitakes. you did a great job and i liked it :)

[Rajat malik]

Thank you Dante :) Made my Evening

[Not here]

awesome :) i enjoy making peoples evenings or days or even mornings

[Rajat malik]

Hahaha....that's great :)

[Mitali Shah]

Don't worry about mistakes. You always learn from them and climb a step ahead. Keep writing :)

As I stop writing just to hide my Pain,
I can still feel the Shower of your Rain.

[Rajat malik]

Thank you so much.....Mitu

[R Smith]

great rhythm and poetry, a heartfelt poem my friend :)

[Rajat malik]

Really....Thankful to you