One Single Night

Loving under the midnight sky is just so amazing......Hope this Poem will take you back to your Life's partner.

                                                                One Single Night

As we sat near the Beach,

Looking at the Moon, trying him to tease

For he was alone and we were a couple,

Everything felt just like an Animal's fable

She sat there with her hands in mine,

And the Moon might have been crying

She was there with me so there wasn't any fear,

Maybe that's why the Moon showered his tears

I looked at her Eyes and her Sweet Face,

I just wanted that moment to be present in my Briefcase

Her Blue T-shirt was matching with the Night sky,

Making me Realize that I wanted her to Fly

For she was just, like a bird to me,

I can do anything for her and she for me

Suddenly from nowhere the Rain started to fall,

She sat curled up just like a Ball

I quickly Realized what I have to do,

Just then we noticed a Fish's crew

I took her in my Lap and embraced her,

It was the time when we both felt better

Mad I was and Mad was She,

But we didn't let each other go free. 

Author's Note

If you think that Something should be Changed then please let me know. Love you all......
Thank you everybody present on Writerscafe because you are the reason of my Writing. :)

Reviews

[Kshitij Srivastava]

So sweet..I almost felt sugar cubes in my mouth. Lol.
Your sense of rhyming certainly implants considerable humour in your writings.
You could get rid of a few unnecessary words here and there..eg. Her blue T-shirt, matching the night sky...sounds crisper. But it's a matter of choice, and I find your version as beautiful as it is. :)
Thanks for sharing. :)

[Rajat malik]

Thank you very much Kshitij.....lol firstly i thought as if noone like this poem as No Reviews Were Coming but now i have understood that someome's there. And Those Lines are For Rhyming Purpose So I think They Looks Nice There.....sorry

[Kshitij Srivastava]

No problem...you are welcome.

[Mitali Shah]

sweet romantic poem :) good one

[Rajat malik]

Thanks Mitali :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Again, sweet romantic honest and heartfelt............
very well written.....
i liked it!!!
:)
p.s. blue t shirt match the night sky? at night the sky is not exactly blue.........maybe dusk or just after dusk.......maybe evening........but you have the creative freedom so you can let the reader form their own opinion...!!! :) :)

[Rajat malik]

Oh....yeah....Thanks Pushkar for telling me about the night sky......I will surely make my way towards changing it.....Thank you a lot

[Pushkar Prabhat]

always a pleasure bro..........!!! :) :)

[AaronFreitas]

Nice work Rajat... I always enjoy your creativity. Keep at it buddy!

[Rajat malik]

Thanks Aaron.....will keep my pace surely