Black Heart

painful and unbearable story of my life

I look as gentle as a flower's petal
But Everybody hates me as hard metal
I am unique nature made art
But Nobody cares about me cause i got black heart


I look as innocent as a child
But Everybody treats me as a wild
I am not in a bad flood
But Nobody cares about me cause i have got bad blood


I don't have any bad desires
But Everybody thinks that i am hurting fire
Everybody has given me a lots of pain
Cause i have got bad veins


I am as good as hobbits
But Everybody thinks I have bad habbits
I think , i am in hell
Cause I have got bad cell

Author's Note

ignore mistakes

Reviews

[A.G.]

Beautiful poem my friend. Everyone always puts a person in a category but never really stops to fully understand that person or their intentions, is how I interpreted this poem. Lovely flow and from the heart. Thank you for sharing- look forward to reading more of your writing 😊💛

-Angelina

[RN RAUT]

Thanks angel i am not going to call you angelina cause you are angel for me. you read my poem so i feel blessed thanks from my heart
-R.N. Raut(way i do is differ)

[A.G.]

😄 you are very welcome my friend. I look forward to reading more of your work.