Voyage of Love

A luscious forbidden fruit from the Garden of Eden

Sowed the seeds of change in a world so quiescent

Vowing to the quest of 'what if?' by Eve with her Adam

The seeds grew into trees, the trees formed forests- the Forests of Change

As the grains of sand inside the huge hourglass of time kept falling

The snowballing change ventured to rapidly transform the world

But untampered by these continuous changes

Persisted to exist a tenacious constant- LOVE

From the generation-one to the generation-innumerous

This everlasting love prevailed and flourished

© Raja Anjana Kothapalli 2015

Author's Note

Thanks a lot for reading it! If time permits, kindly leave a note on how it is!

Reviews

[shekhar rajvansh]

It was a beautiful poem with nice use of words.
And the title u chose for this poem is a very interesting one.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot, shekhar rajvansh!☺

[Alfred Kukitz]

And so on this day we have love that came from very far away. Thanks Raja for sharing! May love always be with you.

Regards,
Al

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thanks a lot, Al!☺

[Gerry Legister]

The voyage of love is taking me on a journey into paradise, this is very warm and loving

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you for your sweet words, Gerry Legister. I am glad that you have enjoyed it! ☺

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting piece, and makes us wonder...what if Eve had never offered the apple to Adam...
what if we were all still in that Garden?
but change is inevitable isn't it? always. for the good or bad.

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

I agree with you. Change is inevitable always. Thanks a lot for the delightful feedback, jacob erin-cilberto!😊

[CA Anurag Sharma]

a very nicely written piece this one... good one

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Thank you, Anurag!☺