I enjoyed the poem. I liked how you described the rain.
"Kissing the flowers
Hugging the trees
Music they sing
Making us swing
Tip tip tip
Joy they drip "
Rain is needed and without her. Nature and life would suffer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for the lovely review, Coyote.
I am glad that you have enjoyed it.
I loved .. read moreThanks a lot for the lovely review, Coyote.
I am glad that you have enjoyed it.
I loved how you have personified rain as a lady.☺
I enjoyed the poem. I liked how you described the rain.
"Kissing the flowers
Hugging the trees
Music they sing
Making us swing
Tip tip tip
Joy they drip "
Rain is needed and without her. Nature and life would suffer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks a lot for the lovely review, Coyote.
I am glad that you have enjoyed it.
I loved .. read moreThanks a lot for the lovely review, Coyote.
I am glad that you have enjoyed it.
I loved how you have personified rain as a lady.☺
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