Baby

You, my existence and my rhythm...

In about a sense’s pick

In about a mad desire

In about a dream

In about a sweet rhythm

You’ve come…

 

In about all my tensions

In about all my en routes to thunders

In about the happiness

In about the play

You’ve touched

          All my being with your magic flesh, mind capturing smell, and astounding eyes

          You " my senses, my desire, dream, sweet rhythm, and play with world

Now, I long to shout, standing on hill, on what

          Gift I possess, to the sun, moon, stars, and thousands of black nights and dazzling days, and to the

          Restless wind and green woods,

          You " my existence… born forever!!

Reviews

[Antonio Chevere]

touching and well put

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beautiful very eloquently said.

[April Child]

Ohhh thats wonderful, congratulations on this touching poem and more for the event of new life. Thank you for sharing this with us, just wonderful.

[An owl on the moon]

Your words lift the reader, like the wind under a kite, taking us into this joyous song of life and love! What you've created here is simply astounding. Each line a vibrant vision, touching the heart and mind with rich emotion. Love this write!

[Fran Marie]

Restless wind and green woods,

You " my existence… born forever!!


A most tender heartwarming and beautifully penned piece~

very well crafted indeed!

[Ivory]

wow what a wonderful piece... great write!!