Eve

For a deep wish to come true...

Eve

 

With thousands of pauses and shines
I am caged to innumerable afflictions that bring

Sentinel to preserve my love " my dearest and my only

Belief of hope, life, and time…

 

She kind of allows me to touch her with her aromatic skin,

So that my nausea would heal

She’s a bit perspired; kisses me with mouthful,

So that I am quivered with its therapeutic impact on body-and-mind

I am shivered and at last breathe fine

There is no choking any more, no cold and all that

Keep me bore…

 

She now allows me to call her “You…”

And I shortened that to “U”

 

U are divine

U are pain

U talk this

U hot that

 

And giving me permission to love U the way we want

In figure and in dream… the way I want

In sea and in stream…the way U want

In sweat and in tide…the way we want "

 

A priceless gift!

 

And told me thousands of folklores to energize the spirit in me

And wish me thousand years, so that I can love more

On the eve of a very special day…my birthday from an

Unexpected “U”

All along!

Reviews

[Chaos]

I love the flow of your work. Each word is powerfully placed. Everyone hopes to have their wishes come true and pray to a higher power no matter what that divine image may be. I wish for my dreams at a man made waterfall in the lobby at my work each day. Peace, dreams, rainbows and magic are drawn, wished and given from the most simple venues to the most magnificent alters. Thank you for sharing your work.

[April Child]

And told me thousands of folklores to energize the spirit in me
And wish me thousand years, so that I can love more


Now you put it out there so beautifully how can the universe not respond?

[Gandré]

Hello Raja, I'm sorry I am too late.. belatedly happy birthday to you, this poem is romantic and wonderful approach... it's like yearning tells a story. The wishful thinking and the love are joined by their color...100 p so glad to see you here.

[DaniElle LaPointe]

In sweat and in tide...... omg. Love that. Thank you for sharing. There is a great well of imagery in the depth of your feelings through verse. I hope to see more like this Raja.

[An owl on the moon]

This is beautifully captivating... Glimpses of love.. coming alive... drawing near... "Thousands of folklores to energize the spirit in me..." Yes.. Perfect, glowing image... SO hope your wishes come true...

[ASMIDEEP]

Very nice poem. . . Keep it up. . .

[emmajoy]

What lovely words, a tribute to love - gentle, kind, decent .. wonderful poem, Raja .. one of your best.

Belated birthday greetings.