Fuel

No obligation, just love!

Like a dune in a dessert

Like sound in abundance

Like forerunner to a dream

Like thousands of hallucinations

 

It’s after all you to create the hypotheses that I’m the owner

Stealing heights without having to touch the ground

 

What’s the reason dear?

 

Tell me something please –

 

Shan’t I believe in you? Or

Couldn’t I love?

 

It was after all you to create drum without any sound

Make paradise, home, and escalate that to another fantasy…

 

No. It’s all the same, ‘Me’

And I’m not the owner now,

But a disciple of echo

That only loves trusts in reciprocation!

Reviews

[QuietPoet]

The title of this got my attention and Im glad I took the time to review it. Very nice write. I like the style you used. Great job.

[Chaos]

I had a real hard time following this piece on the emotional journey you intended. The broken lines, left me trying to find my place in regards to the emotions you were trying to convey. There was a few words that took away from the flow and they were: "It's after all you". I couldn't flow that correctly, so it made this piece difficult for me to read and as a result, I didn't feel the emotion with you. However, the feeling of determination kept ebbing between the lines.

[Abd-afeez]

Why won't i like this? When you blend words so tight the poem resulting is always so good. Its an interesting read for me. Thanks for that.

[mystic soul]

beautiful poem....... I enjoyed reading your poem it was well written with the words you chose to write it with....

[emmajoy]

This is like an ancient writing somehow .. has a touch of past catching up to present. You always write with such beauty and cast your words with great care.

'Stealing heights without having to touch the ground ' - those words need thinking about, so lovely.

[Simone]

Beautiful poem, truely well written. I look foward to reading more of your work

[An owl on the moon]

Beautiful, vivid insights filled with a sense of passion and purpose. You create such a world of transcendence where paradise is home. Loved this poem!