Eyes

Beauty does not always lie in the eyes of the beholder. It is, after all, the eyes that make the aura...

 

The skeptic nonchalance to sign any message that your eyes yield is

 

A serene price I get whenever I’m stuck in the

 

Traffic of views – here and there…

 

 

The massacre it does slowly is unnoticeable if again you set your gaze here,

 

Yes right here…on my left,

 

Wherein an unstoppable humming

 

Ding, Dong, Groan, and Shout

 

For you to eye more – directly or indirectly

 

 

“Just once, please!” the rhythm says

 

Even if you’ve looked at me

 

Just now!

 

 

 

It’s not any praise in pretension, a fact.

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

The eyes say so much and we long to gaze into someone's eyes and see a positive message that we are loved. Very nicely done.

[Ruth]

Amazing imagery once more Raja, love! I am simply blown away by this! Wonderful work!
This is quite an original way to express beauty and vision love!
A great poem
Deserves a 100 lol
xx

[Gheeneil]

"stuck in the traffic of views" was such a beautiful line: wise and well-thought of. it gave images of seeing so many things through a person's eye, that even the beholder could not guess which of those spoke the truth. an interesting write.

[Ivory]

interesting decription of beauty, different... very good : )

[emmajoy]

We see what we see in the mirror of the soul .. seems the eyes have won you over .. your words 'For you to eye more � directly or indirectly' seem to say no matter what you see or whatever you're looking at, I'm watching you, watching your sight lingering, observing ..

gentle post ..

[E. A. Fielder]

Wow this was good. Quite different but very well written.

[Jola]

poem full of the expression...
Greetings Jola

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Ah! The imagery was very striking and the flow was simply flawless..Very much translatable indeed.
Great work!

[Naomi Montana Walsh]

I really like this..I think the sound is a little odd.. but it pleases me..maybe a language thing.. that makes it sound a bit different, that is fine by me it loved it.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a depth of expression on several levels. You awaken us to what is seen and what is beyond our ability to see. So many eloquent passages, but I loved this: "whenever I'm stuck in the traffic of views." Excellent, profound write!