Love

Love for lovely things...

 Suddenly I start finding the tunes

So exhilarating today!

 

In the midst –

The magic lyrics with no cleverness but a true use

And it flows like streams to sea

 

Suddenly, I feel loneliness is

All the same beautiful and beatific today!

In the beginning –

The pessimism vanishes when my

Optimistic desires wage a war on it; it dies at last.

And I’m strong now

 

Suddenly, blue sky defines familiar but

Energetic rhythm in life today!

 

Along the journey –

The tears baffled me no more for my

Dad who’d gone to never-land

And weeping is now a good exercise to me to reminisce him whenever I want

 

I feel like a boxer to hit any loop

And there is no ending

Just ‘cause of the love to do anything

 

May all the trust I bear should testify

My stock and strength

For an urge to do more!

 

May all the senses and hopes

I fathom should clear any doubts!

 

May all the power fixes my

Lust to love more!

 

Amen!

Reviews

[Chaos]

This is an intersting piece of work. At first read, I was lost in what I thought was disconnection, but reading a second time opened my eyes to the feeling and the meaning you were conveying. Love is a strong emotion, whether it's in a relationship between two people or when it's helping you conquer pessimistic thoughts. The part I loved is when you mention your father and passing and the pain that you felt, but the love you have for "all things" even makes remembering him with tears heart felt and that in itself is love. I'm glad I read your poem a second time or I wouldn't have felt the ode to love.

[An owl on the moon]

What an amazing, lifting, vibrant write that gives wings to the spirit to read the "magic lyrics" you've composed for us! Each passage shares hints at the depth of love and life. So well done. Truly enjoyed reading this piece!