I am you...

He is there in me; I am He; I am the moment, sky, vision, journey, love, pain, failure, and success; He is I; He is my search, tune, and symphony.

 

I am you…

 

When sun tops in the sky

With light blue or deep azure, a pure unfathomable

Juncture…

 

When there is hardly a way to feel

Nostalgic about my rosy past

 

Me, hard pressed, sweated, and tensed…

 

When I am looked down upon as

A perfect stranger in this city

 

Looking over to other part

I found so many distressed fellows,

Indescribably waiting for getting a place

 

Cries as to forget agonies

Works hard to find a meal

 

Still, you are with me, as my guardian

You talk, sing, dance, read, and produce matter

For my infinite dreams

And I roam in fantasy, forgetting my troubles

 

I doubt how many do have such a friend

Doubt how many still find a balance like me

From failure to failure, dreaming for success!

 

I am happy to take all burdens,

Waiting to shoulder for more…

Just ‘cause of you,

I am happy at least I have you taking care of me

Like you are no one but me

 

You sound from inside the flesh �"

 

‘You are right!

I am no one but  Only you’…

Reviews

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

a beautiful piece of writing...

[Crazy Cat Man]

a mysterious and romantic piece in a way. great piece

[emmajoy]

There's a very spiritual touch to this writing.. as if you're being guided by something out of this world, something greater than self. You see and feel so much going on around you, you're aware and, you care.

'I am happy at least I have you taking care of me / Like you are no one but me ' .. .. beautiful.

Fine, fine poem.

[Suhcej]

I applaud, this piece is really expressive and made me feel happy just to read it. I has a swift flow to it and that I like. Very creative and simple, quite marvelous.

Demeter Suhcej

[An owl on the moon]

Loved the moving mystery of this piece, flowing in and out of your thoughts, your world... This one, this "you," that is a friend always present... giving you hope to endure hardship for the sake of the dream. Wonderful write!