Wept A Lot!

A best eye-exercise!

 

Wept a Lot!

 

Weeping, weeping, weeping…

They weep all the time

Gas, dust, fumes, and anger

Over eyes, mouths open

 

For me, it is a puzzle

For you, it is another play

For us, untimely work-out

Of inept pain —

 

Just tears!

Reviews

[Dizzy-Izzy]

"For me, it is a puzzle
For you, it is another play"

I love these lines Raja, there ought to be something to say, on the tip of my tongue... I don't know.

For myself, life is a puzzle that I just can't seem to fit together. Other people do it so well... I keep trying to make the wrong pieces go together. Maybe if I pound on them just a little bit more. Doesn't make them go together, it just messes up the pieces. That's my life... a bunch of beautiful pieces that were never meant to go together... I never was good at games.

This was very good.

Thank you

Kristina

[The Autumn Faerie]

I wouldn't call it best to weep...
But it is a great way to express emotions of sorrow, extreme elation, and frustration...

Keep writing, my friend.
May the pen forever reflect your heart!

[Constance]

LOL. I think I rather prefer exercises my eyes by reading. :)
This is a good short, full of emotion.
You might think of changing the title, as the piece seems to garner something a little... hmmm... well the one you have just seems too obvious.