Harvest

Still I feel you there...

 

Harvest

 

A seemingly unspoken delight

Anew with every U-turn

Abreast with fine hypothesis of what I grew up on

 

When I roam in the field

Or walk endlessly for unknown

Or sit by the window with scorching butt

Or just simply think about what happened in the past,

I tried to figure you are the woman

I search like fountain from hills to river to sea…

 

I tried to devour your expression through your irresistible smiles

Close to blooming buds that caress the tree

 

I fancied myself being sat on the edge whereto look further is of no point

Going ahead!

 

I finally have woman in you when you leave off the attire

Cooing a lovely song alone

Without knowing I am nearby

 

Then also you are woman I used to defy

For on another occasion I am sure I will explore you

With another of my honest tries—

Reviews

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

beautifully done ...

[Constance]

Very vivid imagery, and your imagination is clear. I do notice a couple of things you may want to look over, and they are things I notice and know why they are such because I work as a tutor for those who first spoke a language other than English. I also notice because I do the same things in my second language, Spanish.
This line: "I search like fountain from hills to river to sea�" flows beautifully and has a beautiful message, but would be more understandable English if you simply added the word a before fountain.
Overall a beautiful write, and I hope you take my advice with that one line not as that I don't like the work. With things I don't like, I just don't even take the time to leave a review.
Very nicely done. Bravo!

[Ms Jessica Renee]

Wonderful read, thanks for sharing it with me.

[Ray Hamilton]

Nice read I enjoyed it Ray { Not a Poet }

[Emily Elizabeth]

Lovely, reminds me of the greek goddess of the earth, Demeter. Brilliantly written, full of sensual descriptions and it flows nicely too. A very professional piece of work, and it was an enjoyable read. Thank you very much for sharing