As You See

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As You See

 

As you can see

             The face of an old fellow,

             Thereat, find me with the saying that says

             ‘I love you’!

 

As you peel the skin

             To unearth the innermost thing

             The heart that sinks

             Only for you, forever…

             Offshore, just recognize it my dear!

 

As you star in the mid-sky

             I fall nearby in search of Moon,

             Though at first,

             You just call me, and I can stay there

             Like I start…

 

As you feel the wound

             That bleeds nowhere, but on deaths; there

             Can you find your dear one’s crying like you do the same

             For the lose.

 

As just stay on top

            When I can meet you

            Like we never depart,

           On the spot!

Reviews

[Vanessa]

I really liked the line that read,
"To unearth the innermost thing
The heart that sinks
Only for you, forever�"
The last part of that sounded like something I would write.
I honestly liked this the best of all of your poems, because
I had such a connection with it.
Lovely poem and words.

//VK