Dual Sides

'God Bless to my unaware love...'

 

Dual Sides

 

It only happens

Finding someone in love

All for sure as never

Before; that someone picks

The breath n’ replies back

Unforgettable tunes…

 

Myself being rejected, I

Worry no more; I like to find me

For you…yes, just for you!

Only, someone must also feel

The love that stays

Hurts like hell!

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Everything is for her even the finding of yourself. I like "unforgettable tunes". It's a catchy to way to say it. Short and to the point...well done.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

very true words... to the point... nicely done

[Gandré]

this poem deals with the feeling after being rejected. The first stanza says how special it is, when people fall in love.
"Myself being rejected, IWorry no more; I like to find meFor you�yes, just for you!" -------- I love here how you give your self to her... there is such a generosity on those 2 lines. I adore them!
Very beautiful angelical small poem!

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Deep and truly heartfelt . . . speaks volumes. You have a profound gift, my poetic friend. The way you paint pictures with your words, continues to astound me.

[Vanessa]

This is great, for a few reasons, one being the arrangement of words which makes the sounds melt together, and another being the words themselves(of course).

[Crystal Lynn]

Hmmm...this is vey good, but I can't pinpoint exactly why...And that's probably a good thing ;)
Great job.

[Phil Sanders]

Excellent ....

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Yes, two sides of the coin or does it land on its side on the rare occasion? I enjoyed the longing expressed in this work with so few words. Powerful. Well done. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha