this kinda blue

Just words with no place to go..

i've been feeling empty lately

kinda out there all by myself

probably need to get me a thicker coat

put this old one here back up on the shelf

i really need to go somewhere

maybe to the library, maybe read a book

find me a new friend...someplace with a different look

getting too old to ramble...not sure what to do

sometimes think about her...when it's

this kinda blue

 

just don't see nothing headed my way

everyday pretty much the same

people start lookin all alike

everyone seems to have a game

all i got is a necklace from you

sometimes i think the whole city

feels this kinda blue

 

it's just an empty feelin

like this might be all i'll be

some nameless,faceless,no-body

living life aimlessly

i don't see the wind changin

not a whole lot left to do

just sometimes wonder

do you remember me, when it's  

this kinda blue

 

sat in the corner booth

of an old family diner

the waitress that took my order

reminded me a bit of you

coffee and toast

a false smile from the host

a drop of rain

does its lonely dance 

down a window pane

i sit alone in a booth for two

there's a sound to this kind of down

a lonely melody

to this kinda blue

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[April Child]

I agree, this definately sounds like a song...

just am kinda curious
if she ever feels this kinda blue

yes it makes you wonder doesnt it.. You capture it well. That cloud that seems to hang only over your head when you are feeling this way... sigh

[Legion]

Man, I know how you feel. Been feeling this way for awhile, but I've been changing so much in my life these past few months that hopefully things won't seem so "blue". Good write even though the inspiration for it really sucks. Kudos.

[Kelly D. Burris]

Nice write, even if it's blue. I like the progression of the various placements of 'blue' at the end of each section, then you move on. Trying to move on with your life inspite of your blues. Many people out there are going thru this, I wonder how many times we overlook them....
Kelly

[Starlit Scarlett]

I've had that type of day before. It's nice to read someone turning it around into inspiration. That's a neat way to stick it to a bad day huh? I agree with a few of the other posters...it definitely sounds like a song. It's a pretty thought, that sadness sounds like a song.

[Christel Grady]

Welcome to the dark place, my friend. Don't stay there too long! It's not a happy place to be, but I do find that I'm the most creative when I'm there, so maybe it's a good thing?! : )

Peace,
Christel

[Phil Sanders]

Very melancholy ... nicely written ...

[bluessadmood]

very well written rain ,every one has his ups and downs ,i most of the time all in the blues,its a silly life ,thats why we feel like this,great words as usual

[Jenny Davis]

This is so cool, Rain...definitely reminded me of Dylan but with your own spin on things. You are NOT nameless, everyone's talkin at you, remember? LOL...loved this! :)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

wonderfully written, heartfelt write. I know the feeling too well, I feel this way some days. Nicely done, Rain I truly enjoy your words.


Rayne

[ah]

this looks like it could be turned into a song, this is another great write by u my friend, i again thank u graciously for asking me to read your writings