My mistake

 

 

i apologise sincerely,
for i know i hurt you deeply...
told you:
"i lost my trust in you",
but all of it isnt true!

All that is true,
all that i knew,
and all that i believe is true,
is my love for you
and my faith is indeed true!

i was lost in my harsh words,
taken aback in that dark world...
my heart cried for saviour,
but my words condemned me deeper,
regret; my only escape...

venom unleashed and
i pulled back slowly...
contemplating the mess that i made,
i lost myself bitterly;
for the sake of a few misplaced words...

your sadness increased,
you said you lost your angel
i hung my head in shame; diseased!
i dont deserve to be an angel,
nor be loved as a princess
for all that i cause is distress...

im human-bare,
imperfect, i err!
love me...
hurt me...
blame me...
hate me...
but please,
talk to me!

Author's Note

i know its not one of my best but this is what i wrote to my best friend when he was angry with me yesterday and i kept it as it is...i must say this melt him off! lol
comment...reviews please...any criticism will be most welcome!

ps:i dont know why but strangely i find this photo suiting this poem...hope its not too weird!(pic is from fotoblur)

Reviews

[Akshat♥]

The picture is perfectly suited ...it is showing patience and
a kind of following towards your friend...
you realize your mistake is what always counts..
but according to me it depends on the person..
sometimes accepting your mistake is not enough
you have to try hard to calm the person and
it is difficult...poem is showing everything that
you are feeling at that point of time..and there is 100%
chance that after reading this poem your friend will accept
your apology :)

[Nath]

I think sometimes we all screw up and need to beg for forgiveness. It is always good when the mess can be fixed, sad when it cannot.
Nothing is sadder than silence settling. Anger is preferable because any emotion shows that the other still cares in some way.

[Niki Wilson]

Aww,,, So pretty!! Lovely poem!

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I love the poem and the emotions behind it. I would change one word or even the picture I think it is perfect. xx. Most poems written from deep within from true emotions are usally our best. Always remember that.

[November Gold]

I love it all! And you know I related to it so well ;0 Nice work!

[Helpless]

i love this picture. and poem painted a picture of true unconditional love. its gorgeous!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A trusted piece, well done

[tHe]

You could make it into a song! Nice work!

[kasanova]

I like the beginning!

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful!