Release

release of a suffocating soul...

 

She would always stand there,

Alone, on those weeping rocks; feet bare,

Waves would crash in furiously,

Her eyes holding tear pockets,

Yet, she wouldn't shed them; she wouldn't dare!

For the rocks wept for her silently...

 

The gust catches in the folds of her dress,

Her hair press on her cheeks; soothing her...

Her skin feels tight, her hand shivers,

Despair looms around her; ambush!

 

Suddenly, she straighten up; erect!

Her eyes widen; her irises constrict to slits,

Her mouth stretches to a smile; her thin lips, splits!

Finally...peace...

 

She close those lost eyes; once almond-shaped,

Breathed in deeply; for once, relaxed,

and she felt it slowly-

Her heart cracking passionately!

One last time, her lips opened delicately

and her soul sailed out happily...

 

Release

Author's Note

just a dream--or rather a nightmare which i had and twisted it a bit...
comments please
[pic is from fotoblur]

Reviews

[Sukriti Suki]

Perfect! I love how you describe here....Its marvelous..took me to a place elsewhere....Thank you.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Reading this top poem I can picture the lady you're describing. Great write:)