Throes of my soul

throes of a hole....[written for KimLove's contest(12-20 words poetry)]

 

 

 

Caged my soul,

Scarred my heart; strife?

Throes of a hole!

Pain gnawing the roots of my life!

 

 

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Honorable Mention - Throes of my soul

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Author's Note

sometimes short poems requires much more time than we think of!
but i managed to pull this out!
reviews please!

Reviews

[Adam Lain]

Wow! I love the introspective thought "strife?". That sealed it for me.

[Sukriti Suki]

This is deep...very deep. I like how so much is said in such less words. Nice.

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this :D
And yes they're very hard XD wich is why I couldnht join her contest, I am no good at short poems, just because I start feeling to constricted and I freak out XP
but this expresses alot of pain and sorrow, and I love it (: