Throes of my soul

throes of a hole....[written for KimLove's contest(12-20 words poetry)]

 

 

 

Caged my soul,

Scarred my heart; strife?

Throes of a hole!

Pain gnawing the roots of my life!

 

 

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Honorable Mention - Throes of my soul

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Author's Note

sometimes short poems requires much more time than we think of!
but i managed to pull this out!
reviews please!

Reviews

[Raiin^^]

Wonderful! It has so much meaning to it and it gives readers thousands of different perspective as to what this means in their own words. Brilliant job!

[Black]

so beautifull....
wow...
keep it up
and teach me :D?

[Enigma]

I completely agree. The shorter it is, the harder you have to think of the correct word to effectively convey your thought/message.. Well written.

[ivizarx]

short but deep
few words are needed for something like this to be
you use lil words that throw a powerful punch
thnx 4 the RR, liked it alot ^_^

[Sleeping Maiden]

Deep poem yet so short. i love it! ^^ Great write!

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Congrats on placing in the "Powerful Short Poetry Contest" It was personally one of my favorites but I did not get final say. Raingel I think you did a great job and I love the Photo. xx

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Excellent short piece.........and I adore the image used

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

I love this poem, to me it has so much meaning in just those few words. Words that I can relate too. I think this is very well done. xx

[dutch2lips]

very deep write, well done