Heaven

when death taste sweeter than honey...

They shouted,laughed,screamed; noisy,

I watched, silently through the keyhole,

they were happy - elated and smiling,

I watched, alone, in the hall...

 

Nobody knew

Nobody suspected

Nobody cared

Nobody asked

 

why?

 

As if I cared,

Never!

They would never know that he is in here!

He cares!

 

Nobody knew

Nobody suspected

Nobodu cared

Nobody asked

 

They would never understand.

They thought i was mad.

They judged and I withstand!

They said he was dead and i went mad!

 

Nobody knew

Nobody suspected

Nobody cared

Nobody asked

 

He holds me tighter,

I nestled in his arms further,

They knew; they were coming faster!

i close my eyes tighter; and then,

 

Heaven

Author's Note

just a thought which transformed into a poem...
comments? reviews?

Reviews

[Helpless]

awww.... this is so sad but intriguing as well. fantastic work with this!

[TJ]

A very musical flow to this one, complete with a chorus. Thi explores so many different things. It's like abandonment an persecution wrapped into one before the ultimate vindication ad payoff.
Well written piece :)

[Short.Nerd]

I really like this poem. It has a nice flow and rhythm to it. Great job and keep up the good work :)

[kasanova]

me gusta

[CharlesMonroe]

I really like this, the imagery is great. It's just beautiful in a way, great job.

[Alicia Hirshey]

This was a great piece.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A placed and well written piece, well done, good read.