Kaleidoscope of swirling emotions

just an insight perspective which made me wonder about it all!

Times passed by rapidly,

and I was in that bus again...

staring out of the window pane,

gazing as my life pass me by,

all the while thinking about that soft lullaby...

 

Monochrome landscapes, sugar candies and smiling faces!

and I keep searching for my frozen tears,

in a sea of blooming sugarcane flowers,

my heart scared of that glaring sun; fierce!

I was back in June, waiting for him again...

 

An angel pass me by,

and my thoughts snap back harshly to the present.

In a blur, I saw the rainbow high,

glimpses of a caress, a kiss and a smile;

all drown in a maelstrom of colours; a sigh?

 

My eyes fill in with red tears,

my heart ached with severe yellow passion,

my soul whined; craving for black love!

My lips quiver, my skin turns blue,

a last yelp...and he dissapears!

 

Black and white sunsets, chocolate creams and vivid memories!

I searched for the broken pieces of my heart,

in a sea of blooming sugarcane flowers...

Kaleidoscope of swirling emotions; layers of untold stories!

I was back in June, waiting for him again!

Author's Note

this poem came by itself while i was travelling last week in a bus watching blooming sugarcane fields by and by...
i dont know if i got it right because all of it came like swirling from a spiral staircase...
i would love your comments and reviews!
thank you!

Reviews

[Nath]

This poem draws you in to take you on a journey, send you on a quest of aimless search... Intriguing.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A stunning write, love the emotions and the imagery I sense. The use of words is amazing too, very poetic indeed :)

[Black]

it is really unique
I loved the 3th stanza!
beautifull write!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and powerful story of life and memory. Easy to fall to old times and memories. Sometime those old memories allow us to fall back to good times and smile.
"Monochrome landscapes, sugar candies and smiling faces!
and I keep searching for my frozen tears,
in a sea of blooming sugarcane flowers,"
A perfect ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

Very nice piece Raingel, memories and color schemes what a beautiful combination. : )

[Ayumu♥]

Emotions powered by your memory are some of the strongest. This was wonderfully wriiten. Great job

[Haifa]

I liked it! memories and emotions.. all together are became great in the poem. Wonderful writing here.

[Hannah Paige]

reading this, i think i could feel how you were thinking while writing it. like everyone's said already, its beautiful. your writing style here is very elegant. well done

[TJ]

Fantastic imagery

[Alicia Hirshey]

This was beautiful.