Chorus of Angels

I was listening to some beautiful ambient sounds, and this is how I felt while listening to it.

As if underneath a waterfall of sound

The chorus of angels' voices wash over me

All my senses vibrate and hum while my heart pounds

This I know, is what it means to be free

For but an earthly second in their light I flew

Yet I basked there for an eternity

I'm carried on breezes of sound as it blew all through

The angel's voices sing to me the truth of reality

My body becomes evanescence into the chorus

My mind melds with the music's waves

My soul submerges into this light filled ocean of Arcturus

Within the chorus of angels, is where I am truly saved

Author's Note

These weren't lyrics for a song this time. I decided to try my hand at making just a regular poem. I hope you all like it. And sorry for the mistake on the fifth line. It was a typo, but I corrected it. Thanks for pointing it out everyone :)

I do not own the image posted with this song

Reviews

[Holly M. May]

I really enjoyed this poem. =D This is just me being nit-picky but in line 6 I felt kind of awkward with the "for an eternity", and I think if it's just "for eternity" would make it flow nicer. But that's just my opinion. It's a really great poem, and keep up the good work! =3

[Nishant Verma]

For a moment I felt that I've been sublimed in the arms of floral beauty. It's good and intriguing.

[Who Cares]

Your use of vocabulary is impressive, your words flow and sound beautifully much like a roaring waterfall. Your desciptions/comparisions are powerful making the poem unforgettable. You also say that is noise or sound sets you free, when the body is in such a state of relaxation people often say they feel free, you desrcibe this perfectly. Great job :D

[Cathy Wattam]

I like the descriptions you use and the first stanza is especially good. One point I noticed - "For but a earthly second" should really be "For but an earthly second". Apologies if it is just a typo. Sounds like it was a very nice piece of music!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the place you took me with you. Description took me to a beautiful and peaceful place. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Marie]

This is a lovely way to feel...freedom in the angels' singng...

[MOON]

The angels sing , love the imagery especially the line " yet I basked there for an eternity.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I feel a bit of Shelley in this, it's simply very wonderful and beauitful.

[Renée]

Very Good...a heavenly journey ( :

[Orthrus]

Its a very vibrant piece, filled with ethereal metaphors and heightened vocabulary. It's passionate and powerful while also feeling very soft and subtle.

[Beautiful_Nightmere]

I think that this is reallyy good but i like the first 4 lines the most!(: Good job! :D