Chorus of Angels

I was listening to some beautiful ambient sounds, and this is how I felt while listening to it.

As if underneath a waterfall of sound

The chorus of angels' voices wash over me

All my senses vibrate and hum while my heart pounds

This I know, is what it means to be free

For but an earthly second in their light I flew

Yet I basked there for an eternity

I'm carried on breezes of sound as it blew all through

The angel's voices sing to me the truth of reality

My body becomes evanescence into the chorus

My mind melds with the music's waves

My soul submerges into this light filled ocean of Arcturus

Within the chorus of angels, is where I am truly saved

Author's Note

These weren't lyrics for a song this time. I decided to try my hand at making just a regular poem. I hope you all like it. And sorry for the mistake on the fifth line. It was a typo, but I corrected it. Thanks for pointing it out everyone :)

I do not own the image posted with this song

Reviews

[Holly M. May]

I really enjoyed this poem. =D This is just me being nit-picky but in line 6 I felt kind of awkward with the "for an eternity", and I think if it's just "for eternity" would make it flow nicer. But that's just my opinion. It's a really great poem, and keep up the good work! =3

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A delighful mis of angst and emotion,w ell done, good read.

[jennifer little]

good write i liked it you did a wonderful job keep up the good work

[MissDragon]

I absolutely love it! It is quite beautiful. You have a lovely imagination. :)

[lindsay]

this is very good. i was speechless when i read this.

[Vivere ad mihi, mi Deus]

Wow, this is amazing!

[Roe]

wow this poem is amazing!!!!

[Ayanda Mteto]

music is for the soul and you have vividly painted with your words, awesome writing.

[Corey]

Unbelievable. How do you write like that?

[freelancejouster]

i enjoy the way this is presented from the first line to the last, incredibly thought out and fluid at once. kudos.