Run Or Stay

I sit here and stare at this door thats in my way

And one question runs through my mind

Should i run or stay

This feeling is unlike any other

This night calls to me

 

With every cigarette i'm burning my regrets

These regrets that i'll never live through again

And so they say this is how it goes

This life will never be the same

 

As I sit and ponder Run or Stay?

 

(still not done yet but getting there)

 

 

 

Reviews

[Jade (insanity)]

I like what you have so far. Post more soon! :]

[Saturnalia]

The flow needs some work, but I like the imagery and narration. The concept is great. Especially the reiteration of "run or stay". Can't wait to read it when it's completed.