His Lies

His Lies

A Poem by Broken

He told me he loved me,

He Lied

He told me he and I were going to fly to Ottawa this summer

He Lied

He told me I was the best thing in his life

He Lied

He told me he didn't care what other people thought

He Lied

Everything he told me was a lie

 

 

 

 

Edited By: Missing Part

© 2010 Broken


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Sometime better to run away and escape from a liar. Before the damage gets worst. I could feel the disappointment and unhappiness in the poem. A powerful poem. Direct and to the point.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


I did lose something

Posted 14 Years Ago


.............this poem has come to an unexpected end......I wonder if that was intended..........there seems to be a sense of loss or uncertainty......courage

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Broken
Broken

Lloydminster, Saskatchewan, Canada



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