Broken

Broken

A Poem by Broken

As if it could be and worse,

As of it were possible to break,

If only I had one left,

But thanks to him i have none left,

I have no heart left to share,

All i have is my soul but even

That is breaking,

So now I am and always will be broken

 

 

 

 

 

Edited By: Missing Part

© 2010 Broken


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A sad poem. Sometime we must fall down so we can get up and be stronger. A sad ending to a well written poem. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow I guess you are really broken......Time does heal the heart and even the soul
I guess the hope here,,,,is the soul that has not yet been fully broken......and that is hope.......you have captured the 'broken image' well.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on March 19, 2010
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Broken

Lloydminster, Saskatchewan, Canada



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Hey I'm Echo. I am 15 and i have beem hurt by a guy so i have decided to write about it and i thought this this site would help to get things off my chest. more..

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