He will never know

He will never know

A Poem by RaindropsRoses93

He will never understand why my eyes are bright red
He will never  take a second thought to all the words I’ve said
He will never feel the pain that I hold in my hart.
He will never know how much I loved him, right from the start

He doesn’t understand why  I cry when he says her name
Whether he believes it or not he says he is to blame
His hand held in mine was as good as can be
But he has her now and our future he can’t see

He says we’ll be friends and it won’t interfere
But his stories about her are ones I wont hear
I know he is happy and for that I am glad
But my heart will always wonder, of the life we could have had

© 2009 RaindropsRoses93


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These words express your feelings very well and you use great rhyme and rhythm. I wonder if, in the last line, "at" would sound a little better than "of"? Great piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is another poem regarding my uncle it is sort of a follow up once some of the pain subsided

Posted 15 Years Ago


Once again an excellent poem. You are a very good rhymer and I could definitely feel the emotion in this piece.


Posted 15 Years Ago


Oh my....I know these feelings well. You captured the full essence of the other woman..and how it's a tough pill to swallow when the one you love still loves another.

Well done

Posted 15 Years Ago



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