What I Need

I need to breath but my lungs won't expand

I need to think but my brai nwon't hear the command

I need to scream but my voice won't show its self

I need to feel wanted but my heart won't accept the help

I want to feel without the pain that follows

My heart needs to beat without feeling so hollow

I need to feel the warmth of another loving hand

I need to fall apart and have some where to land

I need to fin the justice in my maze of a mind

I need to find the sanity my soul continues to deny

Reviews

[Barbara Walker]

Really like this poem! It flows well, I like your end rhymes. i love that eighth line- I need to fall apart and have somewhere to land.
Know thyself- and you do!
Great job!

[Wildecat]

Very nice, totally enjoyed reading this poem, well done.