Summer Haiku VII

Summer Haiku VII

A Poem by Rainbowco
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Haiku

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wrens by the dozens

shelter in the twisted tree...

a flutter of leaves

 

© 2008 Rainbowco


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Rainbowco
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Ari
I love haiku, but they are usually not visual enough for me. I can really see the wrens in this poem, and moreover, I actually find that I care about them and about their twisted tree.


Posted 16 Years Ago
This is a wonderful Haiku. I loved the imagery of "a flutter of leaves". That was so creative and such a perfect final line.

Posted 16 Years Ago
In my opinion this is a really successful haiku.
I liked the slight rhyme (more of an assonance I suppose) of tree and leaves. it is something rarely seen in haiku but I think it works well.
I also like the image of the twisted tree and the fluttering leaves.
Nice!

Posted 16 Years Ago

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