Wind Rider

On a hot summer night my thoughts turn to the coolness of a storm brewing.

 

The breeze quickens soft teasing through high leaves

 

Gentle sigh of cool relief filtering green downwards

 

Darkly emerald is its color caressing hair, brushing skin

 

The tender fingers of lover, I lift arms slowly upwards

 

To feel but not to touch two worlds I stand between

 

Waiting in the velvet den loud is the coming of the wind

 

Rolling off the high bluff then catching my soul up

 

I become… wind rider

Author's Note

Review as you will. Thank You

Reviews

[Lily1111]

This poem caresses the reader much like the breeze that is its subject. Wonderful sensory descriptions here that sweep up and carry the reader like a leaf on the current of the wind as well. Well done!

[William B. Burkholder]

Wow not only is the pic awesome but this piece in and of it self is powerful, well done and thanks for sharing this

[Thomas James Martin]

I liked this very much, Rainbowco, especially your wonderful use of imagery. Felt the cooling and uplifting with your images of green. Very well-written.
Tom

[Dianne]

What a cool poem! I feel like that every evening as I wait for the breeze to shift and carry away the heat of the day.

[WordMaster]

A compelling and thought provoking poem

You have crafted a very forceful poem with vivid imagery


Well Done!

[JLMatthews]

I like the fluid rhythm of it...it's beautiful. The only thing I would suggest is going over it and checking for typos before posting your work-however, it does not distuinclty detract form the poem, and is still generally a wonderful piece.

[Pakino]

A poem of nature yesss! Finally haha its good to see some thoughts like so put on paper. Great loved it