Storm

 

Thunder

Ripping sky apart

Rain plunges

In sheets

 

Us

Wrapped

In sheets

Now

Together

Riding on

Passion

Sweeping

Reason away

Creating

Our own

Storm

 

Thunder

Ripping sky apart

Rain plunges

In sheets

Author's Note

Review as you will. Thank You

Reviews

[Adrian K. Smith]

Short bursting fragments present an almost rudimentary form of telepathy, as glimpses of the mind and heart are thrown to us. I hate thinking it tribal in nature, for that word carries with it so many misconceptions. It is a raw and powerful piece.

[Fran Marie]

Wild and passionate nite of love~ hmm~ 'creating your own storm' ~
sounds good to me~
THanks for submitting this great write to the Love Shack contest~Fran Marie

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

damn. kinda voilent, if im inferring everything right.

I hope i never have anyone rip my sky apart or plunge rain into my sheets. lol.

i like it