Spring Haiku IV

Spring Haiku IV

A Poem by Rainbowco
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Haiku

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old man sleeps on bench

heron stands thin legged in lake…

dreams of fish dinner

 

© 2008 Rainbowco


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Rainbowco
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Spot on Excellently put I could envisage the scene vividly

Posted 16 Years Ago
A nice visual piece.
I like it. I can see the heron
waiting, not moving fishing for dinner.

The Poor Man's Poet.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on May 16, 2008

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Rainbowco
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