Spring Haiku II

Spring Haiku II

A Poem by Rainbowco
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Haiku

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winds shift westerly
birds wheel, wings brushing water
sky colors the shore.

© 2008 Rainbowco


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Rainbowco
Is this traditional haiku? Review as you will.

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It's amazing how Haiku when painted with the right strokes can paint a live picture. If I'm not wrong, this is "traditional". Yours paints a beuatiful picture. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago

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 Added on May 13, 2008

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Rainbowco
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