Rain Haiku

 

rain child dancing wild

steps pound out thunderous roar

wind whipped melody

Author's Note

Review as you will. Thank You

Reviews

[Aria]

I got a feeling of a Native American dance. The imagery is lovely and flows very well. Good work.

[Thomas James Martin]

I had read this earlier, but did not review. Both the haiku and the other longer poem have much merit. Interesting to see how you handled both.

Tom

[Angelic Darkness]

Nice poem, and I got the feeling of colors while reading it. AD