What You Couldn't See

What You Couldn't See

A Poem by RainbowFlames
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It was there, But it went unnoticed.

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It’s your choice,
Not mine.
You can either draw,
or erase the line.
I’ll love you forever,
Until the end of time.
Even if you don’t want me,
I’ll still wish you were mine.
you are my sky,
you are my sunshine.
When you look at me,
A shiver runs down my spine.
but right now our relationship is a tangled vine,
Soon to be an empty shrine.
I love you,
but I guess you didn’t have a clue,
Of how much my love grew and grew.
but what have you left me as?
A stripped screw.
But I guess I can’t blame you,
you never knew,
How much I really did love you.

© 2009 RainbowFlames


Author's Note

RainbowFlames
i wrote it at 2 am, when i was feeling down with pessimistic thoughts about my relationship. i hope you like it.

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This is an excellent poem, with great rhyming. I'm a bit unsure about some of the phrases, for example "A stripped screw", but overall it flows well, and your grammar is near perfect!

Posted 15 Years Ago


love the rhyming


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g91YGe5ouqs

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on August 29, 2009