Untold Love

Digging the razor into my skin,
This world is turning grim.
There is no one left who cares.
Only burdens left to bare.
Is loving you such a crime?
I drop the razor one last time.
I'm begging you now.
Save me please.
I guess i'm lost, even to you.
I wish you could just get the f*****g clue.
I'm laying here,
Weak and cold.
This is my love that was never told.

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[LisetteCanWrite!]

So sad ... untold love.. this is almost unbearable to read as it's truly raw hurt emotions pouring out.. could feel the depth in the words.. leaves the question why do so many love and hold it in??? I believe in passion.. in fighting for love.. until drained.. every ounce.. if failure occurs .. regain strength.. find a vision.. get up and try again.. Love's fool I guess I am .. until the day I die! I hope you find strength and warmth and the will to move on if these are true feelings.. I love the emotion flowing contained in this!!! =)