Suicidium

these thoughts go on and on inside my head
they contradict me until I'm dead.

Reviews

[Kira]

Hm...I think it could do with some expanding, don't you think? *Laughs*

Somehow I don't think such a short poem is able to convey all you want to say. Some people can do it, but even adding another line or two would make such a difference in the emotional quality. :)