Melancholy Desire

A poem I wrote on a whim..

 

 

I wish.. I wasn't confused..

I wish you knew.. What do I do now?

My heart feels like its being shattered,

like glass, the pieces falling to the floor, cutting me,

hurting me. Don't walk away, don't leave me...

Don't let me suffer.

Sit down and pull me close.. hold me and comfort me.. please?

Don't let me drown in darkness..

Author's Note

Critiscism is always welcome :)

Reviews

[Tyler Bates]

To be written on a whim it is very good. Full of emotion. Very enjoyable.

[Ian]

I liked this, it's a little sad but it's good.

My favorite part was:

"Sit down and pull me close.. hold me and comfort me.. please?
Don't let me drown in darkness.."

Good job! =)

[imm's place]

this is an outpouring of emotions and powerfully presented. hopefully only muse, mary

[The Lady Anasteja]

Brought back the beginning stage of a broken heart.. I feel like crap now. So kudos to you on your powerful piece. =)