The Heart Broken Cycle

 

 

      Today was another lie

 

      So easy, yet so wrong

 

     Wishing I could spread my wings and fly

 

      Listening to the usual sad songs

 

      Thought I could trust him, but yet that was a mistake

 

      Hit by his betrayal, back on the floor I go

 

     Wondering how much more pounding my heart can possibly take

 

      Every time I see him, his smile is like another throw

 

      I know I'll get over him, one day at least

 

      But for now I'll cry tears he doesn't disserve

 

      To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

 

      Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves

 

      Moving on seems to be the hardest part

 

      Watching a fake love fade to black

 

      It truly takes a piece of my soul and my heart

 

      This cycle leaves me broken and cracked

 

    

 

      

 

     

Author's Note

This is to all who are going through this, bc ik I am:(

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast

Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves


maybe sometimes it just appears that way, but people still hurt when they leave one another.. they just dont want to let up.. i know, its silly isnt it..

a nice write thank you for sharing it with us
Antonio :)

[JMKane117]

Dark and moving. I hope writing helps make it easier.

[Jamie]

A sad write but excellently written all the same!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Sad but beautiful thank you for sharing.


we are beautifully Broken to God he picks us
back up we pick up the pieces and we in time
move on once the hearts healed but truthfully
the Heart and the Brain can be the most fragile
thing we have it is why the Squishy brain has a skull
and god tells us to Shield our hearts .


when I was in high school I was hurt by boys and
I've been broken hearted by my father so many
have hurt me so I do understand but our hearts
grow stronger and it seems hard the first or 2nd
time around if we have very gentle tender hearts
I know that feeling so well like you love them so
much it hurts to even love them but we heal and understand
the pain and many lesions we Endure in life.


You sound like a very Strong and Brave Girl Thank you for
Sharing this POWERFUL heart wrenching Beautiful piece once again.




These stanza's lines stood out the most for me and beautiful as well.




Every time I see him, his smile is like another throw



I know I'll get over him, one day at least



But for now I'll cry tears he doesn't disserve



To me now he's nothing but a beautiful beast



Seeing how he can move on so happily hits some hurtful nerves



Moving on seems to be the hardest part



psalms27:14 Wait on the LORD: be of good courage,
and he shall strengthen thine heart: wait, I say, on the LORD.



I follow and Believe this Scripture very Highly.



The Heart can be very strong
and he can strengthen it.



When we are weak that is when
God is Strong in us.


Philippians4:13 I can do all things through
Christ which strengtheneth me.

Blessings. kindred poet

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that heart cycle is very clean like crystal. words what can hurt and words what can stroke . it nice write and i feel very nice after i finish reading thank you

[Blue]

Welcome to the Heartbroken Club, RainDancer! I've been a member for as long as I can remember. Hey, that rhymes. ;) I like how you captured the holistic theme of being hurt in romance.

I agree with you in this part " Every time I see him, his smile is like another throw"

Anyway, do you mean 'deserve' instead of 'disserve'?

[A. Amos]

Once in life we all experience this brutal truth...you my friend have define in such a beautiful manner...bravo!

[Chris]

It takes effort to define your hurt - and heart to display the pain.

[I Am Svetlana]

Break-ups can be tough and seem like the end of the world, but honestly, they are just a step onto the road to someone better. Someone who actually deserves you and willing to give you their all. Even after short relationships (like a month or shorter), I am an emotional mess, but I push myself forward and tell myself that I haven't done anything wrong in order to deserve the treatment I've had. Just tell yourself you're beautiful and that he doesn't and didn't deserve you and just keep your head up, living each day without a worry and keep hope for that new guy to come around someday :)

[Abeer until dawn]

That love meant something at that moment, though it might hit you as a lie afterward ..some things are short-living even if it seems to last much longer, it's the sad truth of our reality!

Thank you for sharing your creative piece, I really enjoyed it

[MAC]

but this write makes you stronger and such much more alert to what love is than he will ever know. an excellent poem