~KillER THOUGHTS~

           

 

           I see the darkness in my eyes

 

          I hear the shouts of there cries

 

          I feel the pain that they endure

 

        I think it's them, but I'm not to sure

 

            Blood dripping on the floor

 

             All from the inner core

 

         I see you scream as I walk near

 

           I can see your every fear

 

        You won't run, and you won't fret

 

    My eyes lock on yours, I'm your only threat

 

       I stand over you, and I look down

 

    I go for the kill, and you hit the ground

 

       I feel the pain that you did not

 

  I put the gun to my temple for one last shot

 

             Oh what have I become

 

 A demon from hell rising like a new bound sun

 

       I put my finger on the trigger

 

 I pull it back and I'm gone into the wind

Author's Note

I'm not like that lol It just came out at a time when I was angrey

Reviews

[Eric]

Probably not what you were relating this to, but this kind of anger that is so fierce that then turns inward is something that''s unfortunately so prevalent in the ranks. After witnessing so much, losing so much, and enduring so much, even the most resilient can snap into this mindset.

[RainDancer1997]

A think a poem is like something that a lot of people don't see the same thing in. Everyone usually gets a dffrent meaning:-)

[Mizo4]

lovely imagery :) nice job

[Rees Thomas]

these words have been beat down into a dark submission, s**t. funny as I'm reading Hemingway at the moment and as we know he went with the wind